The folks over at MegaFest, the T.D. Jakes extravaganza, sure can write a press release. No adjectives are spared as they declare "Bishop T.D. Jakes Electrifies South Africa." We were about to write off the whole thing as too self-congratulatory when we got to the fourth paragraph. "Other highlights of today's events included the MegaCARE Health Fair, which provided general health screenings and physicals to the people of South Africa. During the first two hours of the festival, MegaCARE physicians provided more than 500 general wellness checks and HIV screenings." Forget soul stirring sermons and Grammy winning singers, the real juice is in the hands of the doctors and nurses volunteering their time. Go team!
Monday, October 13, 2008
Why Wasn't That in the First Paragraph?
The folks over at MegaFest, the T.D. Jakes extravaganza, sure can write a press release. No adjectives are spared as they declare "Bishop T.D. Jakes Electrifies South Africa." We were about to write off the whole thing as too self-congratulatory when we got to the fourth paragraph. "Other highlights of today's events included the MegaCARE Health Fair, which provided general health screenings and physicals to the people of South Africa. During the first two hours of the festival, MegaCARE physicians provided more than 500 general wellness checks and HIV screenings." Forget soul stirring sermons and Grammy winning singers, the real juice is in the hands of the doctors and nurses volunteering their time. Go team!
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